Dear Mr Robert,
My name is Steve and I am 12 years old. You dont know me but I know you. I am writting this letter to inform you what I did last week.
Last week I bought a time machine in a garage sale for $ 2.50. My friend Max and I put toghether the machine and we prove it. We travel to the middle ages, but we arrived with other bodies, Max was your horse and I was you.
When I woke up a boy called Niles told me that I had to fight Sir Bevis. Max was my horse I, thanks to him we won. After the battle we went to a tent until we returned home.
Now we are at home. If you recive this letter, answerd me.
I look foward to your reply.
Best wishies.
Steve.
The idea is great. You have some mistakes. You mix present and past. Nice work.
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